Not too shaby!
Wow, despite the animation it had an amazing plot and sound! Bravo!
but if I were to say one thing about, it would be the backgrounds. next time put some more effort into the backgrounds.
But it was good :)
"I ate too many marshmallows" HAHAHA
I would like to be nice....
Yes this is a flash but it seems like one big acid trip. you cannot but stuff like this on this site and think it going to not get blammed
every single flash will have at least one person vote 0
Even though I have not been keeping up with this stuff, I get the concept and its clever. Nice audio and clean animation.
What the heck? This is not Flash at all, try another site. there should be a placefor stuff like this
Even though it was silent it had a great message and was excellent for a animation that used a mouse, 9/10
thank you man.. im glad you appreciate my animation using only a mouse. thank you very much man.
Here's what you can do in the future to make this suck less.
Don't use the gradient Brush stroke, It makes it look terrible
The Lips don't mean anything except for "fap" "fap" which is what they're doing.
The lines overlap in a horrible way.
OVERUSE OF THE BRUSH TOOL! That's for more advanced users who can use it artistic and not use it for general outlines.
Better story would be nice (and who is silvio?)
The sound effects you CLEARLY downloaded of the web make no sense with the multiple gunshots.
You broke the 4th wall (Said something as if your character was doing some kind of webshow. very childish
You are way too young for blood in animations for pointless reasons and finnaly
Jack up that frame rate boy!
This is an excellent demo
Nice job man! very clever and original.
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